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I am writing a story and I have the first part done. COuld you guys give me some constructive critism? I am twelve and want to write so do you think they would let me puplish something?? Also dont let my age affect what you think of the story. Epilouge "Jasper?" I called out from [...]

What do you think of my story? I haven’t edited it yet but this is just the preview thing and part of chapter 1. Please give constructive criticism. Epilouge<br> <br><br> "Jasper?" I called out from my hiding spot behind the tree."Jaz, come on. If you can hear me say my name."I called again hoping maybe [...]